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Frozen butterflies - a poem
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ethical_girl68
Frozen butterflies - a poem
Frozen tears
Like frosted chandeliers
Gently drop
From angels eyes
Exquisitely beautiful
Crafted from crystal
Angelic spun sugar
Softly they fall
Little Shimmering flakes
Of frozen lace
Pirouette innocently
With a ballerina’s grace
When I close my eyes
I melt inside
As a million frozen butterflies
Light up the sky
Copyright © 2011
Like frosted chandeliers
Gently drop
From angels eyes
Exquisitely beautiful
Crafted from crystal
Angelic spun sugar
Softly they fall
Little Shimmering flakes
Of frozen lace
Pirouette innocently
With a ballerina’s grace
When I close my eyes
I melt inside
As a million frozen butterflies
Light up the sky
Copyright © 2011
mezzaninedoor
Re: Frozen butterflies - a poem
lovely piece ...........
I have always wanted to write beautiful poetry but that's not the way it happens for me, I need to try imagery
Tony
I have always wanted to write beautiful poetry but that's not the way it happens for me, I need to try imagery
Tony
ethical_girl68
Re: Frozen butterflies - a poem
triflequeen wrote:Lovely images in your poem and very calming
Thank you very much for reading my poem and for your encouraging comments. Much appreciated Tony and Triflequeen